Mr_Mumbles
07-17-2007, 12:15 AM
Here is the first part of one of my stories i have been working on.
In a land where elves, kings and dangerous creatures lived a young girl stood in a towering tree looking across the horizon. She had shoulder length brown hair that was pulled up in a loose bun, and wore a luscious green tunic that fit the young lady well with a short summer robe over it. Swung over her shoulder was a long silver sword. Lila the girl kept staring out into the distance looking for something. The maiden had already waited two suns and would have to soon move on. Suddenly she saw exactly what she was looking for. Jumping down from her spot she spread out her arms, letting her robe open up to slow her fall until she landed softly on the ground. Then running fast; she made her way towards the object she had seen on the horizon. The girl wasn’t like any other girl; she could run as fast a cheetah and see as far as an eagle. Finally she came close enough to see her friend pass her. She turned on her heel and jumped around to go back the way she came. She caught up again and took a leap from the ground landing on the thing she had been watching for; - her horse.
Tell me what you think of it!
In a land where elves, kings and dangerous creatures lived a young girl stood in a towering tree looking across the horizon. She had shoulder length brown hair that was pulled up in a loose bun, and wore a luscious green tunic that fit the young lady well with a short summer robe over it. Swung over her shoulder was a long silver sword. Lila the girl kept staring out into the distance looking for something. The maiden had already waited two suns and would have to soon move on. Suddenly she saw exactly what she was looking for. Jumping down from her spot she spread out her arms, letting her robe open up to slow her fall until she landed softly on the ground. Then running fast; she made her way towards the object she had seen on the horizon. The girl wasn’t like any other girl; she could run as fast a cheetah and see as far as an eagle. Finally she came close enough to see her friend pass her. She turned on her heel and jumped around to go back the way she came. She caught up again and took a leap from the ground landing on the thing she had been watching for; - her horse.
Tell me what you think of it!